「日本語テキストの英語テキスト化」における生成系AIの利用方法

1. regardless of their major: Replaced “background” with “major” since “文理” in the original refers to humanities/sciences, suggesting the academic focus.
2. acquire foundational knowledge: A slight rephrase to make the statement clearer and more fluid.
3. cultivation of digital talent across all sectors: Reorganized the sentence for clarity.
4. Through this track: Added for clarity and to make the flow smoother.
5. harness digital technologies: Changed “use and utilise” to “harness” to avoid redundancy and make the expression more concise.
6. derive insights, and innovate: Simplified and streamlined the structure for improved flow.
7. culminate in the development of: Introduced to clarify the end goal of the track and to streamline the sentence structure.
8. drive innovations in: Altered phrasing for better clarity and flow.

Overall, these changes aim to enhance clarity, reduce redundancy, and improve the coherence of the translation.

1. of havingという前置詞句を使いました。thatという関係代名詞は、主節と従属節の間に距離があるときに使われることが多く、文章の流れを妨げる可能性があります。
2. field of studyという単語を使いました。backgroundという単語は、学問だけでなく、出身地や家族なども含む可能性があります。
3. skillsという単語を使いました。masterという動詞は、高度な能力を示すことが多く、初級レベルの習得とは矛盾する可能性があります。
4. through their coursesという句を文末に移動しました。文頭に置くと、主語や目的語との関係が不明確になる可能性があります。
5. The strategy also calls forという表現を使いました。andという接続詞は、前後の文が同じ主語や目的語を持つ場合に使われることが多く、別の話題に移る場合には不適切な場合があります。
6. a new track called DIGITという表現を使いました。DIGITが新しいプログラムであることを強調するためです。
7. which aims to developという関係代名詞句を使いました。DIGITの目的を明確にするためです。
8. a subtype ofという単語を使いました。a type ofという単語は、種類や分類の意味で使われることが多く、階層的な関係を示す場合には不適切な場合があります。
9. as defined by the facultyという句を追加しました。経営学部が定義した用語であることを示すためです。
10. use and applyという動詞を使いました。use and utiliseという表現は、同じ意味の単語を繰り返しているように読める可能性があります。
11. business and social dataという表現を使いました。business data and social dataという表現は、データの種類が多くなるほど読みにくくなる可能性があります。
12. discover insightsという表現を使いました。search for insightsという表現は、探索の過程であることを示す場合に使われることが多く、結果や成果を示す場合には不適切な場合があります。
13. in various domains such as …という句を追加しました。イノベーションの対象領域を具体的に示すためです。

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1. Original: The government’s AI Strategy 2019, announced in 2019, sets the goal that all university and technical college students, regardless of their background, should master elementary level mathematics, data science and AI in their courses, and the development of digital human resources is required in all fields.

   Suggested Correction: Announced in 2019, the government’s AI Strategy 2019 sets a goal for all university and technical college students, irrespective of their field of study, to master elementary level mathematics, data science, and AI in their courses. It underscores the need for the development of digital human resources across all fields.

   Reason: The phrase “regardless of their background” could be misinterpreted as referring to the students’ personal or cultural background. The term “irrespective of their field of study” is more precise. The sentence structure has also been revised for better readability.

2. Original: The Faculty of Business Administration has established the Digital Management Human Resource Development Track: DIGIT (Digital Insights for Growth and Innovation Track), where students can use and utilise digital technologies such as data science, mathematical statistics and AI to analyse business data and social data to search for insights and develop new ones.

   Suggested Correction: The Faculty of Business Administration has established the ‘Digital Management Human Resource Development Track: DIGIT’ (Digital Insights for Growth and Innovation Track). This program enables students to leverage digital technologies, such as data science, mathematical statistics, and AI, to analyse business and social data, derive insights, and foster innovation.

   Reason: The phrase “use and utilise” is redundant. The term “leverage” is more appropriate in this context. The sentence structure has been revised for better readability.

3. Original: The DIGIT track will develop ‘digital management human resources’ (a type of ‘value-creating human resources’ as set out by the Faculty of Business Administration) who can search for insights from business data and social data and create innovations such as new ways of being in society, process reform, new product and service development, and business creation.

   Suggested Correction: The DIGIT track aims to cultivate ‘digital management human resources’—a category of ‘value-creating human resources’ as defined by the Faculty of Business Administration. These individuals will be capable of extracting insights from business and social data and driving innovations, including societal transformation, process reform, new product and service development, and business creation.

   Reason: The term “develop” is vague in this context. The term “cultivate” is more specific and appropriate. The sentence structure has been revised for better readability and clarity.

1. 日本語原文の「新たな社会の在り方」は、英語では「new ways of being in society」と訳すのが自然です。
2. 日本語原文の「プロセス改革」は、英語では「process reform」と訳すのが自然です。
3. 日本語原文の「新製品サービス開発」は、英語では「new product and service development」と訳すのが自然です。
4. 日本語原文の「事業創造」は、英語では「business creation」と訳すのが自然です。

The government’s AI Strategy 2019, announced in 2019, sets the goal that all university and technical college students, regardless of their background, should master elementary level mathematics, data science and AI in their courses. The development of digital human resources is required in all fields.

The Faculty of Business Administration has established the Digital Management Human Resource Development Track: DIGIT (Digital Insights for Growth and Innovation Track), where students can use and utilise digital technologies such as data science, statistics and AI to analyse business data and social data to search for insights and develop new ones. The DIGIT track will develop ‘digital management human resources’ (a type of ‘value-creating human resources’ as set out by the Faculty of Business Administration) who can search for insights from business data and social data and create innovations such as new ways of being in society, process reform, new product and service development, and business creation.